martes, 9 de agosto de 2005

Suavemente

Sólo tengo el alma negra. Sólo quiero balancearme suavemente, escuchar la canción, reírme, dejar que el perro ladre.

Parece que por fin se acerca. Una sonrisa delata que sus pensamientos no van por el mismo camino que los míos. O eso creo. Me ciega un instante. Un chaparrón de gotas, lanzadas con mala intención, son capaces de hacerme perder el equilibrio. No lo vi venir.

Risas. Alguien canta. Un perro negro ladra. Quiero correr. El agua no me lo permite. Me balancea suavemente. El chaparrón cesa, pero la mala intención queda.

Ni una palabra. Sólo alguien que canta. Sólo gotas de agua. Un chaparrón que no cesa. Tu sonrisa me balancea suavemente.

7 comentarios:

Marta Moret dijo...
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Marta Moret dijo...

que intenso, me encanta, si es creación tuya enhorabuena, hacia tiempo que no leia algo que me pusiese los pelos de punta.

ahora te paso yo una, que no es creación mia, pero que TENGO LA CAMISA NEGRA, jajaja

Tengo la camisa negra
hoy mi amor esta de luto

Hoy tengo en el alma una pena
y es por culpa de tu embrujo

Hoy sé que tú ya no me quieres
y eso es lo que más me hiere
que tengo la camisa negra
y una pena que me duele
mal parece que solo me quedé
y fue pura todita tu mentira
que maldita mala suerte la mía
que aquel día te encontré
por beber del veneno malevo de tu amor
yo quedé moribundo y lleno de dolor
respiré de ese humo amargo de tu adiós
y desde que tú te fuiste yo solo tengo…
tengo la camisa negra
porque negra tengo el alma
yo por ti perdí la calma
y casi pierdo hasta mi cama

bueno rafita ahora empezare a leerte otra vez, pa que me dejes tan impresionada como hoy, que te echo un monton de menos y que espero que partir de ahora vuelva a estar un poquito mas cerca todos vosotros, que la distancia no haga desaparecer nuestra amistad.

un beso mu grande guapeton

FeR dijo...

grande rafa, me ha gustado mucho este "poema". A veces no termino de entenderlos, pero quizás sea eso lo que más me gusta, que lo dejas abierto, con frases cortas y quizás ambigüas, experiencias momentaneas cargadas de valor atemporal.

Felicidades tio ;-)

Rafael de León dijo...

Marta: Me alegra que estés de vuelta!! Sí, lo escribí yo, pero ya no es mío ;P. Espero que vengas a menudo por aquí, tu blog vuelve a ser visita obligada!!

Fer: Gracias por esa descripción tan sesuda XDDDD No sé qué pretendo exactamente cuando escribo estas locuras. Supongo que simplemente me viene a la mente un recuerdo más o menos vívido, y lo intento plasmar con palabras, más desde el punto de vista de lo que sentí que haciendo una descripción fotográfica.

Si no los entiendes pero te hacen sentir algo (espero que agradable), creo que es bueno. Gracias por los ánimos!

elviratx dijo...

que bonito!!! :)

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Rafael de León dijo...

Este sí tiene poesía... :P Vaya con los spammers, se cuelan donde menos lo esperan. De verdad alguien pica, lee esa burrada y les da algo?!?!?

Espero que no se convierta en habitual, si no tendré que buscar algún sistema para dificultarlo.

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